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Sea



There you are! 
still and vast-
creating ripples,
kissing
 the deadened shore

you stay calm 
at the moment
 like a still, 
resting horizon

at times, you
tap the shore
and recoil
tap 
and recoil



but when the wind 
blows hardly
it sails the waves,
the crest-
biting
and recoiling
drawing some pebbles
to the coast-


the sea has its own 
rythm of sadness-

 when
people's footprints
 mark the shore
but 
momentarily brushed
by waves



P.S
I promised my college bestfriend that I'm going to write 
a poem for her that night. 
Ito na yung utang ko na poem best. 
Wish you were there :(

Photos taken by Damsel
March 30, 2009
Island Garden City of Samal


COPYRIGHTED MARCH 2008

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2 endeavored to criticize:

Pratik Rimal said...

Nice. But, the idea of recoiling is being repeated. Try to reduce repetition V. Came to know about it from a scholar...

Damsel said...

So what,silly? hehe. Repetition is a technique... :D