tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6305557409683097387.post4491805019006249076..comments2023-07-22T23:35:24.017+08:00Comments on Poetographie: Puffed-upDamselhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03251135502896226256noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6305557409683097387.post-5680170112793619842008-04-19T19:53:00.000+08:002008-04-19T19:53:00.000+08:00I have the edited version narin of this poem, il p...I have the edited version narin of this poem, il post it one of these days. :) hehehe. di ko kasi nasave sa usb eh. senxa. luod ang poem uie. duhDamselhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03251135502896226256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6305557409683097387.post-67248820867195854892008-04-18T19:49:00.000+08:002008-04-18T19:49:00.000+08:00i'm not a good critic best... hmmm. try2x lng... b...i'm not a good critic best... hmmm. try2x lng... best try daw ichange ang line na, "when things are done" to something more interesting... i like the poem though. haha. even whores have feelings. hahaPxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12801594767661910321noreply@blogger.com