[Dawn: Cavite State University, Nov. 16, 2009]
Pleasure is not mine, I should not write it-
it is the reward of those who wait
and still on the process of waiting
usually done
in the break of dawn where
everything is youthful
[Miniature Pine Trees: Starbucks, Tagaytay City Nov. 17, 2009]
Pleasure is the song of the foiled,
the requiem of their souls,
sung with so much joy
merrier than
someoneelse's halleluia-
it is cold,
it is forgiving
[ Marathon: Cavite State University,Nov. 16, 2009]
Pleasure is not mine, I should not write it-
it is hidden behind every shadow,
mimicking sadness-
drawing white lines
of hazy,vague
signs.
4 endeavored to criticize:
nice. - jeps
thanks for dropping by jeff! :) more posts please? hehe
Although its quite sad, i like ur poem. :)
Thanks D! :)
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