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From Damsel, with Love

Your
ship's siren
piercing the silence
of the languid ocean

goodbye
as you
left me with
its reverberating, dire echoes

I'll
kiss you
as you sail
sweet memories of travail

gentle
breeze caresses
me goodnight, goodnight
row, row from here-
we'll meet in knifed horizon.

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4 endeavored to criticize:

Jade said...

a haunting quality to this poem,
damsel, a lover resigned to
her lover's exit.

Damsel said...

Thnx!

forgetmenow said...

that last line is superb! it's almost ferocious in its edge compared to the resignation earlier...

Damsel said...

thanks forgetmenow! :)