Your
ship's siren
piercing the silence
of the languid ocean
goodbye
as you
left me with
its reverberating, dire echoes
I'll
kiss you
as you sail
sweet memories of travail
gentle
breeze caresses
me goodnight, goodnight
row, row from here-
we'll meet in knifed horizon.
From Damsel, with Love
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4 endeavored to criticize:
a haunting quality to this poem,
damsel, a lover resigned to
her lover's exit.
Thnx!
that last line is superb! it's almost ferocious in its edge compared to the resignation earlier...
thanks forgetmenow! :)
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