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Spark



Grandfather said
as if to encompass the white yard,
"This metal for builders
wheels antique fire
for old blue ladies"

He led the metal cutter,
pushed a sheet of blade-
the noise clamp our ears,

Spark.



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2 endeavored to criticize:

Rai said...

Ayan. Hehe. So this is what u mean.
Keep writing van :)

Damsel said...

yeah rai. That would be my last poem sa ergo propter hoc. Gustong-gusto ko talaga mag write na yun ang label kaso lang wala eh... tsk. mahirap na.... :)so, ayan CUT-UPS na naman rai, nalingaw ko ana, mura ko'g bata na tigulang, dula dula sa words. hehe