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Buoyant

Us-

away,


You-

trying to reach out


We-

idle

without words

whimpering

between

wasted

invisible lines.


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11 endeavored to criticize:

Don Romantico said...

nice poem...try to reach out more...someone's just next to you...but he's like an air...try to grasp him, he'll soon flow away...

Us...away? no...the Sun shines far away, but don't you see it? feel it's warmth? :-)

You...trying to reach out, and we will reach out...

We...sounds without words that expresses our emotions...

Shhhhhh

Damsel said...

@Don Romantico

I'm sad. please stay... :)
I know you'll be here for me.

you know that You are special...
Promise, i won't rush,
not now.

my tennessee waltz? hehehe

Don Romantico said...

Ok Damsel...I won't leave you...I'll stay with you...right next to you. I promise you.

Don Romantico...

Damsel said...

:) Damsel hugs Don Romantico

pixie said...

to don romantico:
do not leave my bestfriend or else i will kill you! :D

haha. im kidding. im kidding. :D

Damsel said...

to pixie:
do not leave Damsel or else she'll kill you! :)

hahaha...

Don Romantico said...

What do I do? Do I have any choice of not leaving you then? :-D

Rai said...

lingaw ang poem. hmm. am quite intrigued with don romantico ha.

anyway...... hehe! see yah!

Damsel said...

ah, Don Romantico? hahahahaha... rai uie, kilala na nimo :)

Pratik Rimal said...

Huh?

Rai said...

gani gani, kaila nko. humanda. haha