January 24, 2009, 7:30 pm
Wings & Wedges Matina Town Square
Davao City, Philippines
*Damsel reads "WORKSHOP"*
the red metal stool
carries my weight.
the girl in blue stares
me down with tiger eyes.
I face the other side,
drag the stool
as it screeches,
and bites my skirt—
sounding like my thoughts
of repulsion
The teacher shouts,
“What’s the central image?”
the girl nods,
not once but twice
as the man
hammers
my poems
on the table.
I face them both,
carrying
my own weight
he hurls my paper
up in the air,
Our eyes witness
as my words
fall
like loosened
leaves of a tree.
15 endeavored to criticize:
Something that you felt when you were about to recite? Good imagination...Like it damsel...specially the last lines,
Our eyes witness
as my words
fall
like loosened
leaves of a tree.
If only it were autumn, the fall would not be noticed...but...
and i saw the pics...what are they damsel? huh? A package from USA, and what else? What was in it? How come you don't tell me? :-(
Thanks Don Romantico! :) Can I ask you? what is Absence? :P
Absence...when the leaves fall off a tree, that's absence...but then, remember, there's spring...when they will be together again...and there won't be absence...
how about a dead tree? :)
A dead tree is dead...and there's already absence of life...don't thing of absence in something dead...absence exists only when things are alive...when one's dead, you'll miss the presence, but you won't miss the absence...
weeeeeeeeeeeee...
his absence is his presence?
yes...weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....his absence is his presence...weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hehahahaha
Silly! hehe
MY GOD! WA KO KAADTO! tsk.tsk.tsk.
my gaaaaaaaahd jud nik. sayang all out performance baya si sir ricky. hehe. sige lang round three sa march daw, yeah, yeah, can't wait.
what silly?
nothing silly! :)
huh? I'm gonna kill you silly. hehahahaha...
if you'll kill me then I'll die... if i'll die, there'll be no Damsel, right? :) hehe
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