Open,
Open your eyes,
the night is deep
its silence is howling-
a dark,
angry wolf foraging
in the woods
it is smelled of citrus
sweet and fresh-
a titillating aroma
Open,
Open your eyes
the night is engulfing
it is peppered with quartz
a glint of joy
blossoming
it has the starkest smile-
a badge of twinge
of woes,
of an unhappy
soul
hiding behind
the cloak
of
a dismal hope
but if you
try to kiss
the frost
close your eyes
this time
think
of an ocean
under a starry night
and a starfish hugging the shore
you hear
the waves
slapping the borderline
and the
solace
of the night
thumping
in the somber
tune
of
its own
heartbeat.
Note:
This will be my final poem for 2008 filed under ergo propter hoc.
It's sad but it's me...
Bye for now.
hiding behind the cloak of a dismal hope,
~Damsel
When Night is Falling
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13 endeavored to criticize:
why oh why van?
may one month pa to make poems! :)
ill still visit ur site! weeh :D
ur hiding from whom? from where? or what?
hmmm?
rai, i need to pack my things and leave... huhuhuhu. :( please send your holy angels and saints to guide me. :)
huwaaath are u talking about vanessa?? huh?
my angel and saint are already gone for good van :)
uh-oh... don't worry they are in good hands naman... hehe. cge lang, send BACCHUS nalang rai and please tell him to possess me. haha.so i could write MORE POEMS and die like E.A.POE.
O NICE THE WORDS... IN DEEP ARRIVE... INSIDE THE MIND... IS COMING INFINITE RELAX
When night is falling;
I appreciate the night
while dreaming of the day that you compose another poem.
Keep it up Damsel
haha. ok ok. ill send baccus pag makita nako xa sumwer :D
nway, kip writing van! mwah
@ Anonymous
humbly taken...
@ Vince
Thanks Vince. Have a starry night. :)
@ Rai
yeah write. il write more poems sa paper nalang. I miss myself and the blank pages.
deep..
nuff said
@ Stan
hello stan! thanx for dropping by...
It's sad, but it still is nice...I liked the this line, "thumping in the somber tune of its own hearbeat."
Pratik Rimal
thanks P!
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