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Of chalk dust and gavel

Write those words
(apple,
boy,
cat
and dog)

Wipe those words
(with
eraser or
tissue paper)

Write
and wipe

(Live
To
Die)

There
Is no death
In silence

Go on--
Write everything
From E-Z
(name what's lacking,
Scribble,
Never miss a thing)

Live.
Write.

Until
The judge
pounds
his gavel--

imprisons
You
to death

And to the screaming
Silence.



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5 endeavored to criticize:

Pratik Rimal said...

There
Is no death
In silence

put that in the last stanza...it will sound good. those lines didn't fit well in between reading and wiping... :-)

Damsel said...

okay P. :) point taken...

Damsel said...

Write those words
(apple,
boy,
cat
and dog)

Wipe those words
(with
eraser or
tissue paper)

Write
and wipe

Go on--
Write everything
From E-Z
(name what's lacking,
Scribble,
Never miss a thing)

Live.
Write.

Until
The judge
pounds
his gavel--

imprisons
You

There
Is no death
In silence.

Pratik Rimal said...

imprisons you to death...

yet, there is no death in silence...

Damsel said...

Write those words
(apple,
boy,
cat
and dog)

Wipe those words
(with
eraser or
tissue paper)

Write
and wipe

Go on--
Write everything
From E-Z
(name what's lacking,
Scribble,
Never miss a thing)

Live.
Write.

Until
The judge
pounds
his gavel--

(and
imprisons You)

There
Is no death
In silence.