Tiny Star
for D
There you are,
Shining like an aluminum dust
Brighter than the other’s
You’ve been dangling there
In the doomed sky
Together with your own
I once saw you in my dream
You were distant
But you could hear me talking
I sent my wish eight years ago
I hope it reached you by now
But how? You're light years away
There's no any chance
I could have you
There's no any chance
I could have you back
Now, I'm asking you to stay
(Wishing)
So I could see you
always
Every night,
Among all other stars
As tiny as you-
Shining
in their most
Brightest spark.
I'm wishing for you to stay-
Silent in the dark.
Shining like an aluminum dust
Brighter than the other’s
You’ve been dangling there
In the doomed sky
Together with your own
I once saw you in my dream
You were distant
But you could hear me talking
I sent my wish eight years ago
I hope it reached you by now
But how? You're light years away
There's no any chance
I could have you
There's no any chance
I could have you back
Now, I'm asking you to stay
(Wishing)
So I could see you
always
Every night,
Among all other stars
As tiny as you-
Shining
in their most
Brightest spark.
I'm wishing for you to stay-
Silent in the dark.
originally written: February 5, 2009
9 endeavored to criticize:
it's interesting how one letter can be used to allude to two people! (wink wink)
happy valentines day best! mwah
Two people? oooooopsssss.
Happy valentines too! :)
Little Star
For D,
There you are,
Brighter than the other’s,
I once saw you, You were distant,
(But now, you are with me...you walk with me)
Could you hear me talking? and do you hear my voice?
I sent my wish sometime ago,
I hope it reached you by now, did it? You're a distance away...
There's no any chance,
I could have you,
There's no any chance,
I could have you back,
Now, I'm asking you to stay
(Wishing)
So I could see you
always
Every night,
Among all other stars
As tiny as you-
Shining
in their most
Brightest spark.
I'm wishing for you to stay-
Silent in the dark.
Happy Valentines Day to you too...both pixie and damsel... :-)
what's this, p? a reply to my best's poem or an edited version? mmmm
A comment to Damsel's poem in an editied version...with my few words...words kept here and there....is it good? Pixie? :-) Damsel, is it good? That's for you. :-)
@ Pixie
for D, for Damsel. Feeling pud ni P sa iyaha ang poem, c P man xa dili xa c D :( tsk tsk
@ P
Thanks P!
comment?
hmmmmmmm, I think mine is better, hahaha. :P Where art thou? :(
Feeling pud ni P sa iyaha ang poem, c P man xa dili xa C? huh?
Welcome Damsel
yeah yeah...yours better. I'm here...
hihihihihihi, silly! :P
And then, I'm not silly...you silly... hehahahahahahahaha
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