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Smoke's Soul

I puffed
And I coughed

I coughed
it was tough

It was tough
It was rough

It was rough
And I laughed

I laughed
And I hopped

I hopped
And I stopped

I stopped

And there was a cloud of smoke

Dancing before me

It imitated me:

It coughed,
It laughed
And
It stopped

There was the cigarette butt,
its smoke
and Its soul-
Smoothly vanishing
Undulating toward the absence.

Originally written: November 18, 2008

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9 endeavored to criticize:

Rea said...

i feel like this is for me. i like eht. nice one van.

pero i know that this isn't for me. haha :D

Pratik Rimal said...

Yeah...I still cough because of the puffs...it's rough...how come you know about smoking? You haven't started right? :-p

Bun. said...

why not rai... para sa imoha na ang poem.. wee :) pre val. gift nako, char. i=-edit nako na xa pagbalik sa gensan butangan nakog for rai :) mwah

Damsel said...

one doesn't have to smoke to catch the real feeling feeling of smoking. how come you still puff and cough, huh, silly?!!! tsk.tsk :(

Damsel said...

@rai, post val gift pala, hehehe

Rea said...

hahaha. shet ka van. murag bagay man gud for me ba. hehe

nway, thanks for that gift.
its appreciated. weee :D

Pratik Rimal said...

I puff and cough cause I still smoke...I guess... :-s

Damsel said...

P! tsk.tsk

Damsel said...

@ rai
np rai. mwah