I puffed
And I coughed
I coughed
it was tough
It was tough
It was rough
It was rough
And I laughed
I laughed
And I hopped
I hopped
And I stopped
I stopped
And there was a cloud of smoke
Dancing before me
It imitated me:
It coughed,
It laughed
And
It stopped
There was the cigarette butt,
its smoke
and Its soul-
Smoothly vanishing
Undulating toward the absence.
Originally written: November 18, 2008
9 endeavored to criticize:
i feel like this is for me. i like eht. nice one van.
pero i know that this isn't for me. haha :D
Yeah...I still cough because of the puffs...it's rough...how come you know about smoking? You haven't started right? :-p
why not rai... para sa imoha na ang poem.. wee :) pre val. gift nako, char. i=-edit nako na xa pagbalik sa gensan butangan nakog for rai :) mwah
one doesn't have to smoke to catch the real feeling feeling of smoking. how come you still puff and cough, huh, silly?!!! tsk.tsk :(
@rai, post val gift pala, hehehe
hahaha. shet ka van. murag bagay man gud for me ba. hehe
nway, thanks for that gift.
its appreciated. weee :D
I puff and cough cause I still smoke...I guess... :-s
P! tsk.tsk
@ rai
np rai. mwah
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