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I write to dance


There are so many lines--
they are all curves
always bending
always flowing
they do not
breathe
and
stop-

their lives inside
the four corners
of the page
are caged-
Align Center
they tremble
like
s c a t t e r e d
d
o
t
s.


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eyes_8miles said...

Nice style Damsel...it's abstract...I like it...and you didn't congratulate me (leaving a comment) on my blog for completing a century on my poems...

Damsel said...

Congratulations P! weeeee... uhm, we'll talk on saturday, okay? :)

eyes_8miles said...

ok V...thanks....I do hope there will be electricity...now its 20 hours a day...and I'm in terrible shape. I wanted to talk to you on 28th of Feb but I had to go to a poetry workshop...and I'll be going on one again on 28th March...and I posted a happy poem Damsel...

Damsel said...

weeeeee. Poetry workshop? that's fun! :D loadshedding again? :( Take care always... and....... be a good boy! :D

eyes_8miles said...

Whatever...yeah...a poetry workshop...and I'll be going again in 28th march...what do you mean? I'm a good boy :-p

Damsel said...

weeee... excited? hehehehe, good luck P! i'm ha P for you, hehehe. oh, are you? :D just kidding P, take care always. miss you soooooooooooooooooooo much.

eyes_8miles said...

Miss you so much too Damsel...I'm just about to leave for yesterday's workshop...it's 8 am here...I'll be going at 9...take care. of course I am excited silly...and yeah...I'm a good boy... :-p I can get naughty though...what do you say? :-p

Damsel said...

yuck P.. naughty huh! :) P, huhuhu, damsel's ugly... check the pics :(

Damsel said...

don't worry P, i'll be fine:( huhuhuhuhu