Last March 31, 2009 was my blog's (scarletpoetions.blogspot.com) 1st birthday but unfortunately I was not able to celebrate its birthday on that date. It was a month long preparation. However, the celebration was barred due to some unforeseen "events" ( Thesis, my very unbecoming "emo" moves and super active social life). It was only yesterday that I was reminded of my blog's first birthday and so here I am writing an entry about it. I planned to repost the 1st poem I wrote in this blog. I promised myself that the first poem deserves to have a revision. Luckily, it was not a long poem, hehehehe, less work.
This blog is my virtual bestfriend who doesn't know how to react but just listen to everything I wanted to say, hehehe. I love this blog as much I love myself. Since I don't have the access to give my blog a personal domain, i'l stay with blogspot first hanggang makahanap ako ng sponsors. The least thing I can do with it is to fix the lay-out
1st Template by Pyzam.com
(it was a pink template, hehe, so gay)
2nd Template
and post more "helpful and useful entries", hehe.
Once again, Happy 1st birthday to scarletpoetions.blogspot.com, I love you so much!
Here's the poem:
Original Post:
The Secret
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par+icuLars Objet d' Art
Covered faces with darkened souls,
seeing gallery of faces at the podium
time's running- counting 3,2,1
green's waving-
a blotted color of red unveiled.
Revised Version:
Cloak-and-Dagger
Poker Face-
the pulse of the clock
tick, tock,
crossroad mocks
"go"
bloodshot eyes.
Better Late than Never (Happy 1st bday scarletpoetionsdotblogspotdotcom)
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