There you are!
still and vast-
creating ripples,
kissing
the deadened shore
you stay calm
at the moment
like a still,
resting horizon
at times, you
tap the shore
and recoil
tap
and recoil
but when the wind
blows hardly
it sails the waves,
the crest-
biting
and recoiling
drawing some pebbles
to the coast-
the sea has its own
rythm of sadness-
when
people's footprints
mark the shore
but
momentarily brushed
by waves
P.S
I promised my college bestfriend that I'm going to write
a poem for her that night.
Ito na yung utang ko na poem best.
Wish you were there :(
Photos taken by Damsel
March 30, 2009
Island Garden City of Samal
2 endeavored to criticize:
Nice. But, the idea of recoiling is being repeated. Try to reduce repetition V. Came to know about it from a scholar...
So what,silly? hehe. Repetition is a technique... :D
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