I am a visual reverberation-
rowing away like a boat
in a distant pattern
of circles-
when the water is still
I sleep
then wait again
for someone to tap the surface
so I could leave the dock
to sail
for another catch.
There was an imaginary happiness in this blog. I planned to recreate my Life. I sailed away.In a humble abode I found happiness, I found a New LOVE, http://vmalmeria.blogspot.com/.
6 endeavored to criticize:
Hey,thats Milan here!!Its really good to visit that website,and I found some great Talent here!!Keep the good work,and keep going.Heh
WOW! I am amazed at your literary skills. Especially since english is not your first language. I can't even come close and english is my first language.Great job!
No endeavor to criticize, only to praise. Nicely wrought. Bravo!
It's so nice poem! Loved it! ~Dib
@ Milen: I am just a nobody Mil! I offer these poems to the PUBLIC, open for criticism and subject to denunciation.
@ Z: I'll pursue writing in English even though the task is demanding.
@ Gerry Boyd: Thanks for dropping by!
@ Dib: I would love to receive "criticisms" from you, Dib!
Your work...one is almost always more beautiful than the next.
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