One morning when the sky
Turned overcast,
She* sang the song
of the saddest people-
a gesture of sympathy.
When she reached
the last line,
the sky
gave birth to tears
So she sang with my hands
Trembling- she looked
above the sky
And felt the tears
Gone
For they danced together
With the wind and the ritual
Of the sky-
They hit her
with sharp edges,
Like little arrows
Freed by
playful cherubim.**
**The last lines of the poem
were originally written
(after the word trembling) as:
And my tears
And its tears drifted-
Rolled into one.
*The persona is changed into She as suggested by Kaeos.
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