I dip my fingers
deep within
the well of loneliness-
the empty spot
somewhere
in the middle of nowhere
I dip my fingers
deep inside
that empty spot of loneliness
nowhere-
in the middle
of somewhere
I dip
my fingers
deep somewhere
in the well of nowhere,
in that empty
spot of loneliness
my fingers,
I dip well
in loneliness
and in that empty
spot
of nowhere
my fingers
well dipped
and somewhere
in that nowhere
I empty
the loneliness of well
well,
my fingers are dipped
and in that somewhere
the loneliness of nowhere
is empty,
within
within these well dipped
loneliness,
I empty
my fingers
somewhere,
nowhere
inside,
my fingers' loneliness
spots
the empty
somewhere-
in the middle.
3 endeavored to criticize:
Van...
why the emptiness?...
we only become lonely when we choose to be alone...:p
luv u...
Love You Too Jonah! :)
it's the reverse... hehe
Wow! When I read it, I get the literal vision, but there's a strong tug to view it figuratively...and then when I add the title, I swing over to figuratively...and then I'm envious.
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