Like a child
you begged me
to kiss
you a sin
to explore
another portion
of our skin
i was swayed
with some thoughts
of repulsion
as you drew
a curve
on your lips-
i had a second thought,
"i'll dart a kiss."
I blamed
all the humps
and all the curves
present around us
that afternoon,
even
the fluttering curtain
that hid our defiance,
the pseudo-
innocent walls
of your room
that knew YOU-
DEEP
WITHIN,
the silence
of darkness
and the creak
of the bed
that carried us
and the weight
within us
the wrinkles
we made
on your bed,
your toes
atop mine
and my thigh
where you reached
your ecstacies-
were once
in my dreams
and fantasies
we were chained
in the bed
heavy
and unforgiving
i dragged you,
inch
by
inch,
in
and out
as i
slid
my fingers
deep
into
somewhere
and to the other skin
in
between.
7 endeavored to criticize:
Uh-oh...
is there something wrong Mr. Pratik?
Wow! That is a really good poem,though I didn't expect the content to be almost "R" rated,but great none the less.
Thanks Eaz! Does the poem succeed? haha.
Yes I think so.
Great poem! lol I wouldn't expect something like this coming from you.
Well, expect the unexpected! LOL.
P.S
so, finally you liked my poetry, huh? :)
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